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Moria - Final draft by dark-illusion Moria - Final draft by dark-illusion
Ok this will be my final draft, my next submission will be final, so voice ur opinion now =) (Smile)
ok i still dont know what to make with the opening there
i've added flames to the dorr rims hehe
and added a sorta ghostly image of the ppl in the movie as they're passing thorugh here, hopefully it will give a better sense of size and contrast
also the slight blur is not a PS, its sth that was done to "try" to add to the atmosphere....still dunno if it works
comments and suggestions appreciated
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Ernaug Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2007   Photographer
its veery nice... but I think it hasn't got any floor! except that it's good work :)
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gnowoga Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2002
awsome work. I cant wait for the final
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e-dragon Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2002
Looks great like it is ............... but would rock, I think, if you added a tile or cobble stone floor, just a thought on my part but a lot of work on yours Nod :D (Big Grin)
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breid Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2002  Professional Artist
This is seriously nice work. Would love a larger version!
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antigrrl Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2002
wow, absolutely mesmerizing. i love the detail work and the whole piece itself. great job
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jazuk Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2002
Yeah really nice pic, could be 1024x786! but the textures and all round atmosphere are really good. I agree about the shadows being needed tho. Nice job :) (Smile)
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sixwings Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2002  Professional Photographer
Forgive me if I repeat something that has already been said, but I didn't have time to read the comments on this.




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First thing I'd do is to add some shadow (just slight) on the floor of those pillars. The whole thing seems a bit fuzzy looking to me and I'd also show some seperation of the pillars with a slight highlighted edge on the right side of the pillars on the left and on the left side of the pillars on the right (would also make them look more 3d if you did that)

Over all - very creepy and very cool Thumbs Up
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stotty Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2002
Read some of these comments - I have to agree with lord zany about the pillars not on the floow - shadows would really help that, and nick suggested a different pov - go for it - I have my own to add, I know you have worked tirelessly on the texture work on the pillars, but they look a little odd to me still, it appears you have a different texture on each pillar, rather than a variation of textures on each pillar - I am thinking more each pillar could be pretty much alike, but the texture for one pillar ahve more variation, although all that said, it would mean the same goes for all the piece :o (Eek) - perhaps go with what you have. The ghostly figures are a really good indication of height - much higher than I first expected.

Coming on leaps mate, well done.
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nicky Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2002  Professional Artist
also i forgot to say, to make it look "bigger" lower the Point Of View to that of equivalent eye level of the people. ;) (Wink)
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nicky Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2002  Professional Artist
super! only points for improvment are the bases and shadows of the pillars and a few depth of field messabouts and colour overlays. but it is looking awesome thanks for the devwatch too. i'll take a look through the rest of your devs soon
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merlin-tbd Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2002
this is progressing very nicely indeed the detail is amazin :) (Smile) cant wait for the final a definate fav :D (Big Grin)
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bainy Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2002
It's very very good :) (Smile) Can't wait to see the full version. Although in this pic it's as if moria has been 'scaled down' 100 or so feet ;) (Wink)
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lord-zany Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2002
That's great but i agree with spyguy, add shadows of the pillars on the floor, and try to make them look more connected to the floor, however you do that........ and some effects like that and a few orcs, lol, and you're done :-) (Smile)

Final will probably be a fav unless you completely fuck it up
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paranoidinhell Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2002
it's great, real moria, but why make the moria in the movies and not the one that's in your mind (that is if you read the book)

great one though, this gonna be a fav.
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emersed Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2002  Professional Interface Designer
wow! I can really see a differnece. this is brilliant.. I can make out the oval type ceiling.. great texture ...this is beautifully done and as the above said.... just how one would picture Moria...... and it isn't as dark as one could think Moria to be.. beautiful.
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matrix7 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2002  Hobbyist General Artist
Very very dark, foreboding and "Moria-ish". Jst like I pictured it man, excellent work!
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furryphotos Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2002  Professional Photographer
Yory floor and celing textures have progressed welll. I feel that the scene is a little dark and kinda hides the coloumn textures. It does not really look that big to me but i guess its ok. Like what spyguy said u need shadows on the pilklars and people.
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spyguy Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2002   Interface Designer
The pillars look like they're floating. Put some shadows on the floor to make them look better.
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dark-illusion Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2002
u know i've been looking at my work for some time and just now i think i should remove the blueish color...
unless everyone disagrees =) (Smile)
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realityx Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2002  Hobbyist General Artist
Does anyone know what vanguard just said? :-/
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snottyangst Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2002
great.. i love how does th columns looks.. and the shadows,
it looks pretty nice :) (Smile)
i like the texture of the floor and wall :D (Big Grin)

nice work Black Rose
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vanguard Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2002  Hobbyist General Artist
tah fixe so que as colunas nao parecem estar "assentes" no chao... nao sei... talvez seja por causa da luz (tenta por umas cores k acompanhem a luz)...

de qq forma e' uma coisa diferente, e tah porreira :) (Smile)
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tigaer Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2002  Professional Digital Artist
looks great how it is so far... don't know what you could change... Shrug great work with a lot of nice details. i'll let me surprise by the real final version :) (Smile)
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evechat Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2002
It's very good. I like it.

Eve
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muzikkman Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2002  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
i've been waiting for the final of this to come out man, it is nice, ill wait to the final to make it a fav, but oh yes, it will be a fav
good work man, its good to see people make different drafts and stuff these days, its mostly just submit something and leave it even if somethings need changing.
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